stuwotlittle

One day there was a mouse called stewartlittle there was a boy trying to get ride of him.
Then the boy brought a dreaful , horribul chickin home then the boy set a trap for the mouce.
Smiling mysterisusly at the chickin, the mouse squeaked BOO! frightend , the chickin started to run.
Then the chickin stepped on the cactus and started to lay eggs , the mouse had a chance to go after the cheese , with out getting pecked.
The chickin stoped laying eggs and went after the mouse.
The mouse noticed and ran back in to it's hole with the cheese.
Then the boy worked in to the messy, dirty, horrible room that he could hole believe his eyes.


by Elisha y

The honted hose

One misty day I was working past a brookon house i rilly coudon't resist so I went in.
I was so sceard when I opend the door I sore a gost and a sceliton on the floor .
I screamed for help but no on hered me...........
No one sore me agane I cep on looking a rang the house I was sceard the gost will get me.

I was upset i coud not see my mummy and daddy agene so I cep on working so I sore a nuver gost and a sceliton I but a live sceliton I fated.
I wokeup in a sceliton chanber I thorght I was going to die in till it had to be noked down I was free agane I sore my mummy and daddy thay were wating for me I was so happy to see my mummy and daddy .

My mummy said to me you shoud not of went in there I thorght I lost you forever.

I sore a nuver honted house I went in and my mummy and daddy went after me than that wore stuke in side with me I was noy alown I was happy my mummy and daddy but I was sceard agane I sore a sceliton on the floor lay there I tutch it it moved it was alive my mummy screamed and me then daddy tolf us to stop screaming and run so we did it and we dided we had a hart a take..................
before I hered a boo and we all fated and fand are salf in a sceliton canber agane and I sare a light shine and it was a way out and we were happy agane we had a barby quwe we in vited some friend over I in fited my friend over she never apeard and I got her out and she stade over

The honted house

spike shoud not of left bubba.

I strongly bleave spike shoudn't of left bubba alown because he could of hort his salf and he all so could of hert his salf on the metol.

Spike left him in a dedront plase and bubba agreag bubba was so frighted and nuvese bubba becase he was the forst poson to see him.

Bubba was in the water tawer and suddontly he chaneg he must of been changed to a difront bubba got a difront body in side him by aleyons thay changed the good bubba to a bad bubba.

Bubbagot out of the water tawer with a difront face and the water tawer shape on his hands the peapol looked up bubba was standing and evryone looked at him with a smial on there face like thay no what is going to happon to him.

by Elisha y

p.s spike shoud not of left bubba a lowne in a dangros plase and bubba defnoltly agrag

hi it is me agane i am going to tall you some think year6 is going on a trip and i am so happy a so sprised it is grat it is so cwiyot wive out year6 in the class and peace full a I love it it is pease full lots and lots.

I think wive out year 6 it is beter to be at school defnot ley wive out year 6.

I apusloot love it wive out year 6.

by elisha

p.s It is so cool

Hi it is me the spy bubba is still in a place he isont coming back to his family.

I think he dosont evon miss his family he is an orfon at the momony because he is all a lowne and he has to go back to his family because the pliase is looking for him.

I no he is so in truboll wen he gets home by his mum and if he has sister or a bruver thay will be happy wen he is home but thay will wont to no evry think thay will give his room back.

thank you good biy

by elisha

Mantle Inspired Writing

All alone in a dangerous place, Bubba was splashing his feet in the murky water only up to his knees, he was having a moment all alone. Bubba said to himself,
"I wonder Spike is. Spike, Spike, SPIKE!" he calledout into the depths. No answer.

Bubba was starting to get scared and lonely. So Bubba really was cold and he climbed out of the hatch. He didn't see anyone. Spike had gone.

Bubba was standing on his shorts and he was wrapped in his towel. All around there was wind, clouds and the town behind him.

It was an old creaky tower with an ancient crumbling ladder; inside there was murky, dirty water.

writing about bubba

Hi it is me agene In a have to I am going to tork about bubba I as lorning about him. It was a mistey night bubba went in the woods and no one nowes were I was going nowon nowe were I was all a lowen bubba steped back snap went a twige I was so fritond I looked all a rawend ther was no one ther a sept from me I started to get scerd~ wored and no one nowes where I was going. I was just standing there wored some think is coming arthter me so I looked agane it was so scered bubba ran throw the mist and was wondring were Iwas going I didont evon no were i was going.

Total vison detective
Elisha yarnold
I am a spiye I finished my spiy dotektive spiy stufe a cupol of days a go
My favret spiy detecteve thing has finley been finished